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Post by Froststar on Oct 18, 2006 1:25:08 GMT -5
I have an idea for the advertising! Listen close Warriors The Frost and Snow For countless moons the four clans; FrostClan, SnowClan, RainClan and SunClan lived in peace. Other than the occasional spat over territory there was harmony. Though only twenty moons ago a new leader rose in the forest, one who invited rogues into the Clan territories and whose name still is used to scare kits: Doomstar. Doomstar attempted to conquer all three of the other clans though before he began he committed suicide, however his daughter Froststar survived and is now the leader of FrostClan. StarClan has predicted that the daughter of Doomstar will split the clans, does this mean Froststar or is there another? And more importantly can it be avoided? With RainClan siding with FrostClan and SunClan siding with SnowClan nothing is certain. But with even SnowClan’s great leader Snowstar is harbouring a secret that could tear the clans apart forever and Whisperstar; the leader of RainClan has spoken a terrible prophecy: Devastation shall rip the forest apart Frost will bite and burn all, and sun shall melt snow to water Winter will freeze all resistance, save five True leaders will lead the Clan back four And rogues, back to their hovels Death and secrecy score all of the Clans, and the prophecy seems to hide more then it reveals. Join to attempt to avoid the clan’s terrible destiny. www.frostsnow.proboards101.com/ Feel free to edit it...
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Post by Whisperstar on Oct 18, 2006 19:32:45 GMT -5
Ooh.. could you add a little bit .. like say..
Death and secrecy score all of the Clans, and the prophecy seems to hide more then it reveals.
Say, to right before it, or after it? And I actualy thought of another important character! *adds*
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Post by Froststar on Oct 18, 2006 23:50:30 GMT -5
Okay! So wats up?
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Post by ~Snowstar~ on Oct 19, 2006 1:04:05 GMT -5
That sounds good, Froststar. I think you should add, somewhere along the line, that the three of us are members. It may boost something... Ummm... Yeah...
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Post by Whisperstar on Oct 19, 2006 18:37:14 GMT -5
What?
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Post by ~Snowstar~ on Oct 20, 2006 0:33:04 GMT -5
((I was addressing Froststar about her idea for advertising. Sorry)).
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Post by Froststar on Oct 20, 2006 0:37:32 GMT -5
Hi this is a Site that me and Madame Mystery made and Amelia Areb is a leader Warriors The Frost and Snow For countless moons the four clans; FrostClan, SnowClan, RainClan and SunClan lived in peace. Other than the occasional spat over territory there was harmony. Though only twenty moons ago a new leader rose in the forest, one who invited rogues into the Clan territories and whose name still is used to scare kits: Doomstar. Doomstar attempted to conquer all three of the other clans though before he began he committed suicide, however his daughter Froststar survived and is now the leader of FrostClan. StarClan has predicted that the daughter of Doomstar will split the clans, does this mean Froststar or is there another? And more importantly can it be avoided? With RainClan siding with FrostClan and SunClan siding with SnowClan nothing is certain. But with even SnowClan’s great leader Snowstar is harbouring a secret that could tear the clans apart forever and Whisperstar; the leader of RainClan has spoken a terrible prophecy: Devastation shall rip the forest apart Frost will bite and burn all, and sun shall melt snow to water Winter will freeze all resistance, save five True leaders will lead the Clan back four And rogues, back to their hovels Death and secrecy score all of the Clans, and the prophecy seems to hide more then it reveals. Join to attempt to avoid the clan’s terrible destiny. www.frostsnow.proboards101.com/
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Post by Froststar on Oct 20, 2006 0:38:32 GMT -5
? or too obvious???
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Post by ~Snowstar~ on Oct 20, 2006 1:17:39 GMT -5
No, I think it's really good! But, and you know how this bugs me sooooo much, please put punctuation in! (Yes, I am a freak who cares about stuff like that)! Try... Hi! This is a site which Madame Mystery and I have created. Amelia Areb is a marvelous leader already. Warriors: The Frost and Snow (make this underlined and centered, hehehe) For countless moons the four clans; FrostClan, SnowClan, RainClan and SunClan lived in peace. Other than the occasional spat over territory there was harmony. Though, only twenty moons ago, a new leader rose in the forest, one who invited rogues into the Clan territories and whose name is still used to scare kits: Doomstar. Doomstar attempted to conquer all three of the other clans before he committed suicide. However, his daughter Froststar survived and is now the leader of FrostClan. StarClan has predicted that the daughter of Doomstar will split the clans, does this mean Froststar? Or is there another? And, more importantly, can it be avoided? With RainClan siding with FrostClan and SunClan siding with SnowClan, nothing is certain. But even with SnowClan’s great leader, Snowstar, a secret which could tear the clans apart forever is being kept, and Whisperstar; the leader of RainClan has spoken a terrible prophecy: "Devastation shall rip the forest apart Frost will bite and burn all, and sun shall melt snow to water Winter will freeze all resistance, save five True leaders will lead the Clan back four And rogues, back to their hovels..." (center this) Death and secrecy score all of the Clans, and the prophecy seems to hide more then it reveals. Join to attempt to avoid the Clans' terrible destiny..... www.frostsnow.proboards101.com/
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Post by Froststar on Oct 20, 2006 1:24:07 GMT -5
Okay so I advertise it?
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Post by ~Snowstar~ on Oct 20, 2006 1:26:21 GMT -5
Yesh! Yesh! Yesh! And I shall add a message after it... Coz I feel I must have my say!! lol
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Post by Whisperstar on Oct 20, 2006 17:26:40 GMT -5
O.o So, is this just for HM? Or all over? 'Cuse if this is for everywhere, Marzi would be the name I would perfer to be about
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Post by Froststar on Oct 21, 2006 16:01:35 GMT -5
This part is just for HM:
Hi! This is a site which Madame Mystery and I have created. Amelia Areb is a marvelous leader already.
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Post by Whisperstar on Oct 21, 2006 18:52:43 GMT -5
Ok, good ^.^
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Post by ~Snowstar~ on Oct 21, 2006 23:32:27 GMT -5
Lol... I am soooo excited... I feel completely mental... Oh my goodness! I am on such a high right now...
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